Preparation Note

The things that I want to achieve:
1.let my classmates have fun
2.let my classmates know the bad effect of  plagiarism
3.let more people remember me



Cite:All the pictures from website " www.baidu.com"

Homework3"plagiarism"

1.plagiarism means play (with)Jerry&Tom.

If you plagiarize,you will...

-bitten by Jerry

-bitten by Jerry and Tom

-eaten by Tom!!!

2.plagiarism means play gym and rhythm.

If you plagiarize, you will...

-stand on the gym and play the rhythm before the whole school

-dance on the play gym over and over day and night

-play the rhythm until the earth stop spinning

3.plagiarism means Pie lays in the room

                     If you plagiarize, you will...

                -pick up the terrible pie and eat it
                     -never allowed to eat pie again

-eat the pie of the whole world at a one day

Blog Peer Review

I am reviewing Zoe's blog,it's my pleasure.

Purpose

Points:7 

Comments:Zoe can engage the material and have a good understanding about the story.

Points:6

Comments:Zoe do display her thoughts about the material,but in my opinion,the thoughts could be more.

Audience

Points:10

Comments:Zoe's blog is totally written in English.Good job!

Points:10

Comments:Zoe's English is very good.She can use the basic vocabulary correctly and sometimes she can use some advanced vocabulary and sentences.

Points:5

Comments:I'm so sorry about that Zoe's name isn't displayed in English.

Genre

Points:5

Comments:Zoe doesn't use the layout of the blog I think...It's not very obivious in some degree.And she also hasn't appropriately tittled her posts.But anyway,it's easy to use this blog to search for a particular post.

Stance

Points:7

Comments:Zoe takes a stance on the material,but to my regret,she doesn't claim that her atitude to the material very cleary.But I do feel her stance.She,of course,simply tells us what the material is.

Media/Design

Points:10
Comments:Users can leave comments on the blog.
Points:6
Comments:I can't see Zoe's design yet.But maybe this is her design?

Total points:59

Final Comments:Zoe's artical is very good yet.She can have a design for her blog which makes her blog more attractive.Zoe also can show her thoughts and feelings more in the blog.

Homework2"repeat after me"

  After reading more,I have more understanding of the story.Some mysteries gradually have been out of the dark.Why Lisa pays much more attention to animals rather than human...It is no exaggeration to say her atitude to human could be desribed to "indifferent".But in some way,"I" is a more indifferent people than Lisa.When he heard his sister's sad and startling story,his instinctive reaction was reaching for his notebook.He earn money by selling his familys' privacy.Anyway,"I" haven't lose my feelings yet."I" until have sympathy yet,just don't know how to express,I think.     Anyway,I really like this article"repeat after me",especially the endding which has some magical colour.

Ailment:disease

Sear/seared：burn

Errand:help someone to get something quickly

Errant:uncontrolled

eerie /Eerily:weird,strange

confine/confining:limit

quintessential:typical

pans/pan (verb):travel,go,move

Homework"Repeat after me"

   Today I want to share my reading thoughts about "Repeat after me".Lisa is a complex and vivid character in the article.She is a sensitive,smart,and control freak woman who is the oldest child in family.She was the child who thought to be closest to success.But  not anyone's life will go smoothly all the time.Lisa is not the exception.She dropout.She had a very struggling life. But finally,her efforts pay off.She becomes a successful woman and has a decent life.But after suffering a lot,of course,unavoid,she changed in some degree.She always feels dangerous which makes her a little bit strange.Sometimes,she doubts herself.She pays much attention to others' opinions,withering at the slightest criticism.Lisa is a fictional character.But she is also a reflect of our life.