Blog Peer Review

I am reviewing Zoe's blog,it's my pleasure.

Purpose

Points:7 

Comments:Zoe can engage the material and have a good understanding about the story.

Points:6

Comments:Zoe do display her thoughts about the material,but in my opinion,the thoughts could be more.

Audience

Points:10

Comments:Zoe's blog is totally written in English.Good job!

Points:10

Comments:Zoe's English is very good.She can use the basic vocabulary correctly and sometimes she can use some advanced vocabulary and sentences.

Points:5

Comments:I'm so sorry about that Zoe's name isn't displayed in English.

Genre

Points:5

Comments:Zoe doesn't use the layout of the blog I think...It's not very obivious in some degree.And she also hasn't appropriately tittled her posts.But anyway,it's easy to use this blog to search for a particular post.

Stance

Points:7

Comments:Zoe takes a stance on the material,but to my regret,she doesn't claim that her atitude to the material very cleary.But I do feel her stance.She,of course,simply tells us what the material is.

Media/Design

Points:10
Comments:Users can leave comments on the blog.
Points:6
Comments:I can't see Zoe's design yet.But maybe this is her design?

Total points:59

Final Comments:Zoe's artical is very good yet.She can have a design for her blog which makes her blog more attractive.Zoe also can show her thoughts and feelings more in the blog.